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Seconds Ticking Away by HawkeyedElite Seconds Ticking Away by HawkeyedElite

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-The sun is setting; let's watch the twilit sky, shall we?

Princesses and peasants, illness and truth, sunlight and twilight, optimism and pessimism, birth and rebirth. These are the feelings of our faithful companion, Doctor Whooves. After having witnessed the coronation of Twilight Sparkle, he fears that Twilight may not be prepared for the future. He has watched Twilight from afar since day one, and begins to realize what impact she may have had on his life.

There's only two hours before she arrives back home. Follow Doctor Whooves on his self-reflection to understand the new era that is arriving. And maybe, put yourself in Whooves' shoes to better understand the perspective of ourselves...-

Another fanfiction, this time with a character I've been meaning to write with for a long time: Doctor Whooves.

FUN FACT: This is, actually, my response to the whole "Alicorn Twilight" controversy; read between the lines, you'll see it in there. But if you can't, I think that we shouldn't judge the premise without giving the production team a chance. I mean, Season 4 is confirmed; there could be some solid episodes built off of Twilight being a princess. Or not, I don't know. The point is that I have the benefit of the doubt; I loved the episode and how it was played out! Sure, it's a big change, but so was learning about Shining Armor, and introducing a whole other princess, and creating a whole other kingdom. They're expanding the universe of the show, and who knows? Maybe something will happen to stop Twilight from being an alicorn. We don't know that yet; so now, we play the waiting game...

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:iconikxsan:
ikxsan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I didnt think there was a way out finding this was the greatest thing thats ever happened this put me in the lap of luxury this could be your big break
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jbkong22 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
私は黒と私は人種差別主義者だ
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student General Artist
なぜあなたはそれを言うでしょう?
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toniigh-t Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HEY EVERYONE CHECK OUT HIS OTHER DEVIATIONS leaves quietly
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Advertising on my thing, Cap?
*Hug*
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toniigh-t Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
; v ; /hug
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BluColour Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I apologize, for some reason I commented on the wrong deviation... very strange
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh. No problem.
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:iconblucolour:
BluColour Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
This is in popular 1 month. Deviantart is going down hill with all this my little pony and hentai.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
If you've read this, it has nothing to do with hentai. Plus, just because it involves MLP doesn't make it inherently good or bad. The content speaks for itself, and apparently, it's good content.

Don't judge a book by it's cover.
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TheLupineReturns Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... I'm sorry for not reading this sooner! I gotta say, this is pretty interesting! The point of view is one thing; a background pony. Instead of one of the mane six, Spike, or a Princess, this is coming from the humble yet most favored background pony, Dr. Whooves. I liked the way you characterized him in this as being nothing like the actual Doctor (because we all know that Dr. Whooves is NOT The Doctor). I have two favorite parts in this story: the story of Dr. Whooves' cutie mark and the extended metaphor comparing life to a grain of sand. I loved the little anecdote about how he got his cutie mark; it really explains the cutie mark well, and was also a very touching story. Not to mention, it did help with Whooves' reflection about how he really doesn't hate Twilight. The reason why I liked the metaphor is because it simply makes so much sense, and not on just a MLP fanfic level, but on a life level, if you get what I'm saying. I just think that it's easily applicable to daily life, and that's what makes this piece so interesting! Some of the lessons reflected here can be applied to real life, at least, in my opinion. I just really love this story, and it makes me want to watch the actual episode now. 83 Excellent work, Hawkeye.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for the feedback! :D

You haven't seen the episode yet? Watch it ASAP; it's so good!
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:iconcahunter:
CAHunter Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Time keeps on slippin', slippin', slippin' into the future!
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Indeed...XD
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:icontrekkie-aspie:
Trekkie-Aspie Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
One nitpick: It's 'following suit'
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
*Checks it.* That was an auto-correct...:X
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:icontrekkie-aspie:
Trekkie-Aspie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Yeh...you may want to turn that off... see damn you autocorrect for more details.
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:icontrekkie-aspie:
Trekkie-Aspie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
You may want to turn that off:

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FireFly-Rain Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
omgosh why are u so aweosme
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
'Cause I've got friendly readers like you. :3
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:iconvinnie-the-dragon:
Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Tick Tick Tick Tick *BOOM* The brony fandom is no more.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Not while Twilight is still my waifu!
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:iconvinnie-the-dragon:
Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Twilight is okay. I prefer The Hunger Games, though.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:XD: I see what you did there...
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:iconvinnie-the-dragon:
Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Yeah buddy.
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:iconcoolzoo123a:
coolzoo123a Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
BY CELESTIA'S BEARD THIS IS EPIC!
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you. :iconcelestiasmileplz:
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:iconihaveexams:
ihaveexams Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
i have exams
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Um...okay?
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. Perfectly beautiful.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you. :D
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:iconlightfeathy555:
Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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FatesGuardian Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*glomps* Thank you. This episode made me doubt MLP but reading this... I think you made me love it even more now. So... Thanks!
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm glad to hear it! Thank you. :D
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:iconpowered-by-redstone:
Powered-by-Redstone Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
(HAWK THIS IS ON THE FRONT PAGE!!!! 24 HOURS!!!!)
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
(I KNOW!)
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:iconshadow19967:
shadow19967 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Professional Writer
Cool. Im sad right now but ignore it. Thats all i can really say right now. Good job
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you. :)
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shadow19967 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Professional Writer
No prob
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CloudiestNights Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
TL;DR (yet)

I skimmed some, and this looks really intriguing! Will read when I get the chance!
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm glad you think so. I hope you enjoy it in its entirety. :D
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:iconamatera5u:
Amatera5u Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why does MLP have a ponified Doctor Who? :?
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:iconthegreataiko-sama:
THEGREATAIKO-SAMA Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Because people though the pony looked a little bit like David Tennant (but not really) and since he had an hourglass on his rump and ran around a lot people referred to him as "Doctor Whooves". This name became widely accepted and even became to be his official name (Doctor Hooves). The animators realized how popular this unnamed background pony became and started adding him in more episodes.
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:iconamatera5u:
Amatera5u Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hum. Hum hum. Fair enough.
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:iconhawkeyedelite:
HawkeyedElite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
And there's more. I remember an episode where there was a ponified version of male tennis player Andre Agassi. :3
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